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Brainstorming-v.4

Sun Aug 27, 2006, 2:44 PM
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The only thing that I really changed in here is Kain and Blank's past
Just a little note, when they move from town to town, they spent at least three weeks in that town before moving onto the next town except for his hometown where he only spent a night or so there...

Title: Seeking Solace

Characters:

Misery: Pale blond hair and aqua green eyes. Left eye patched
Kain: Dark blue hair, red right eye and yellow left eye. Right eye patched
Solace: Red hair and turquoise eyes. Right eye patched
Blank: Black hair and brown eyes
Puck: Black hair and blue eyes
Forlorn: Pink hair, blue eyes


Misery’s story: Male
A child that was born blind, loved by his parents and soon hated by others. He was born blind and began to hang out with Solace when he was only four and soon became best friends with him. Before his eye surgery, him and Solace got into a fight over it, Solace not wanting him to get it because something bad always happens when you change yourself, but he wouldn’t give it up because he wanted to see Solace. Spending a week in the hospital and not getting a single visit from Solace, he was beginning to worry and feel a bit sad, where was his best friend when he needed him the most? Anyway, when his bandages were taken off from him and in front of him stood his parents, he did realize that he couldn’t see through his left eye, but that was okay, since he was able to see now and that was what he wanted the most. He looks at the picture that his parents had brought him earlier that week and sees the teen male, realizing that it was Solace. He rushes out of the hospital to go tell Solace the great news but instead, finds him beaten, bloody and bruised. He brings him home to bandage, the whole time though, Solace has not said a single word. A little confused and worried, Misery wants to bring Solace to the hospital as well, because his right eye had been either shot out or stabbed out. Solace finally says to him that he doesn’t want to and that they’ll go tomorrow if Misery is really that worried, so Misery finally goes to sleep, with Solace sleeping on the bed that he made from him on the floor. The next morning when he woke up, Solace was gone. Ever since he turned 15, he set out on a mission to find Solace...(Real name: Seraph)

Kain’s story: Male
The result of his mother's rape and the cause of her friend's death, her was abused as a child since he was able to walk. When he was young, he didn't smile much at all, he hated talking to people and make any friends. At the age of seven, he ran away from home and met up with Lucifer, who took him in along with seven other kids around his age. They traveled together for about nine months until all the kids fell behind and the only one left was Kain. The result of his strength to still keep up, he was given the demon and that's how he got the demon eye. He ran away from Lucifer after getting the demon because he felt like he wasn't loved anymore since all that he wanted was to feel loved and accepted. He continued without food for a couple of days before he fainted and woke up with Blank taking care of him. Within matter of years, they became best friends and Blank was able to teach Kain some different ways of looking at life. Blank shows Kain around town and that's when he met Misery for the first time, it was then that his demon side first had a reaction to anything because Misery asked him about his demon eye, he didn't have the eye patch yet and Misery already went through the surguy, Misery says something about his eye being different from everyone else and he gets kind of offended. Later, Kain over hears Blank's parents telling him not to hang out with him anymore and that is what triggers the other parts of him. He slowly starts to build up another personality incase Blank does leave him because he's the only one that he has left. Although there is a mystery as to why Lucifer put the demon in him.

Solace’s story: Male
Living in an orphanage for most of his life, he finally moves out when he’s eighteen to work and earn a little bit of money all because of a little boy that he met when he was twelve. Misery first entered his life when he was twelve, walking down the streets and seeing the blind child being picked on by everyone else in the neighborhood. When he was nineteen and Misery was undergoing his eye surgery, he argued over the fact that Misery shouldn’t get the surgery because one of the officers that were watching over the orphanage, his favorite that he looked up to as a father, left for a heart surgery and never returned, rumor going around that he had died because of it. Misery was acting really childish because he said that he wanted to see Solace and everyone else that he had loved so much, to Solace this was no excuse to be risking your life over. He gets mad and runs away only to get killed by a gang that just roams around the town. In the process of the murdering, his right eye was shot out, leaving him blind. The next week, he spent his time sitting next to a body that looked so very much like his own, the marks all over his body looked so much like the lifeless one that was on the ground with all the caution signs. He decides to walk around and ask others who this boy was but then bumps into Misery who takes him in and cares for his wounds. He doesn’t really say anything since this little boy is talking to him like he knows him, although he does have the burning desire to ask this little boy about himself but decides not to, for that may have been a offending question. Instead, he just leaves that night, telling the boy that they would check up in his wounds the next day by going to the hospital. He leaves off to his journey to find himself, find out who he actually is...

Blank’s story: Male
At the age if eight, he met Kain and took in the fainted boy. Although he knew little about him, he still took care of him until he woke up. Little by little he was able to change Kain into a different person and learn about his past. It was then that he decided to enter into ninja school so that he could protect Kain whenever he thought that he needed help. His parents told him countless times to not hang out with Kain because he had a red eye, that's pretty different compared to everyone who had normal eye color, but Blank just wouldn't leave the boy. One day, when he was coming back from ninja school, he heard towns people saying that Kain had left town with someone and he instantly ran after him.

Puck’s story: Male
A rich, snobby and popular kid that holds a grudge against Misery for making his father lose his job. He is the first to start calling Misery...well, Misery. His father was one of the few doctors that helped with Misery’s eye transplant. After getting fired, his father left the family because he was afraid he had shamed them. Puck’s now working as a model, still rich, popular and snobby, while his mother owns a hotel.

Forlorn’s story: Female
Her father was murdered after being wanted for three years for murdering. Since she was five, she’s been alone because the townspeople hated her for her father’s doings. She lives with her mother but then her mother works a lot and doesn’t have time to play with her. She spends most of her day in the park, trying to fit in and play with the other kids and returns home during sunset because that’s when her mother comes home. there are plenty of people in her town that hates her because her father has murdered their family members.

Story:

Chapter one: Meeting Kain
Misery has been out on a journey to find Solace for about three years now and is returning home to check up on his parents and his cousin, who knew about him leaving and eventually told Misery’s parents as well. On his way back to his hometown, he hears this little boy shouting something about a mass murder somewhere near by and he decides to check it out after making sure that his parents are okay. He runs home and can’t seem to find his parents, so he rushes over to the murder scene and sees many children and few adults that are dead laying around here and there while others were armed with whatever that they could get a hold of.
Trying to find his parents and bring them to safety, he finds himself engaged in a battle against the murder only to beat him unconscious. Knowing what the citizens might do to the young murder, he decides to bring him along just to take care of him long enough until he gets better. He quickly leaves the town without even a gimps of his parents, just hoping that they would be safe since he seemed to have gotten himself into trouble again with the stranger tagging along that the citizens want to kill.
Withing a couple of days, they had already exchanged names. Kain, the murder, seems to be attached to Misery for some odd reason, maybe because he saved him and brought him along even though he first saw him as a murder. Noticing that Kain has gotten much better and can now walk and protect himself, Misery tries to leave him only to fail and have Kain continue to follow him. Knowing very well that he can’t lose Kain or even leave him behind, he decides to just let Kain join him on his mission to find Solace.

Chapter two: Meeting Blank
After about a day or two, Kain gets tired of traveling and wants to rest although Misery said that they had to keep going because his job was waiting for him and he couldn’t be late. Hours and hours of nagging went by and Misery finally said that they could rest for awhile so they did, just long enough for Kain to fall asleep and Misery would give him a piggyback ride. The sun is setting and Misery is also getting tired from walking and carrying another person on his journey to the next city for his job.
Little did they know that in the shadows roamed another person, ready for an attack. Swiftly, this other stranger attacks Misery and he loses Kain. Quite confused as to why someone would take Kain, Misery quickly rushes after him, just incase the attacker might a person sent to follow them to get Kain back to the town to kill him for the murdering. Kain wakes up in the arms of a different person, although slightly confused as well, he does recognize this face and is glad.
After talking for a couple of minutes, he asks the stranger, his friend, where Misery is and of course the stranger doesn’t have the slightest clue as to whom this Misery is. Kain gets a little pissed off at his friend, Blank, for being so stupid as to attacking him and within seconds, Misery jumps into the scene and attacks Blank, still thinking that he is out to kill Kain. Kain tries to stop both males from fighting, although Blank isn’t fighting to his fullest since he knows that Misery is now a good person, Misery is still attacking him with full force.
The burning sensation of killing, between both Blank and Misery, begins to calm down as Kain introduces both of them to each other. With a smile of satisfaction, Kain leaves the two males to talk as he drifts back to his sleep that was interrupted by the fighting. Seeing that Misery is an all right guy, Blank decides to tell him about Kain’s past and asks him if he could make sure that Kain doesn’t have to suffer through anything like that anymore. Misery seems to understand the multi personality man a little more and nods his head, telling Blank that he’ll do as best as he could to make sure that Kain is in good hands. Feeling satisfied, Blank leaves at night, knowing that Misery will take care of Kain.

Chapter three: Carnival
Reaching a town that is rather big and pretty, Kain just wants to spend time with Misery and relax a little. He knows that Misery isn’t really the type to relax, but after begging and begging Misery to hang out with him at a nearby carnival that had just recently opened up, Misery decides to just take him there. Although hanging out with Kain had made him fall back on his job for that month or so, he isn’t really bothered by it, somehow he’ll just make up the hours later. Although when they do hang out at the carnival, Misery does start to realize how very similar Solace and Kain are by their childish personality. They take a few pictures in the picture booth because Kain wanted to remember this day since it was his first time being in a place like this.
Near the time of sunset, Kain sees this older women standing under a sign that said fortune teller and thought that it would be cool to hear this little pretend story that this girl had to tell. So after nagging at Misery long enough, he finally gets to go over there. Kain lets Misery go first and so a little foreshadowing will happen here and when Kain goes, it says something about his past haunting him in the future, there will be a few flashbacks of the past, but not the parts with Lucifer that will haunt him.

Chapter four: Meeting Puck
As they enter the next town, Misery’s unspoken and painful memories begin to walk the surface as he meets up with a familiar face, Puck. Even till now, Kain still has no idea as to what Misery’s past is like, he never bothered asking because he could just tell that it was something that he didn’t like or even want to talk about. Misery sees one on Puck’s picture in a store and he gets a little freaked out so he wants to quickly get out of the town because he doesn’t have business in that town, but what do you know, he bumps into Puck.
A little surprised to ever see Misery again, Puck just tries to be as nice as he could, telling Misery that he was just being really childish and didn’t mean to do anything that he did in the past and is really sorry. In trying his best to prove to Misery that he’s sorry, he asks him if they would want to stay in his mother’s hotel for the night...and the cost was on him, since he’s a model. Misery respectfully rejects but right at the thought of a free night in a nice hotel, Kain jumps in and nags at him to stay because he was really tired anyway.
Seeing not to be able to resist the face of a pleading Kain, Misery finally said that he would stay and so they were lead to the hotel and given two separate rooms. Kain stayed with Misery and Puck for a while before thinking that they were just old friends catching up on loss moments spent together, although Misery didn’t seem to be too excited about it. Kain leaves to his room to rest for the night since he knew that the next day, they would have to travel very far since the town was far.
Misery and Puck stayed up, talking about what each of them is doing and why was it that one day Misery just left the town without even telling anyone, not even his parents. Misery doesn’t answer but instead just keeps saying that he’s tried and that he wanted to sleep. After a couple of minutes in silence, Puck finally decides to leave Misery to rest and let him sleep. Misery stays up for a couple of hours thinking slightly about his past, not too much about it and ends up sleeping.
Kain has to use the bathroom and when he leaves out of his room, he sees someone else walking into Misery’s room. He follows behind him slowly and realizes that it was Puck with the intentions of killing Misery since he had some sort of weapon in his hand(s).
Kain jumps in and instead of Misery getting hurt, he gets hurt. I think he gets stabbed in the arm or something like that and his blood drips onto Misery’s face, they stay in that position for a minute or so, Puck in too much shock to do anything more while Kain just doesn’t want to wake up Misery. When Puck finally decides to make his other move, Misery beings to move slightly from the warm liquid that dripped onto his face two or three times already.
Puck tries to get Kain down so that he can finish his job, by killing Misery for what he did to his father. Kain, having great experience in fighting already, was able to doge Puck’s move and put him in a strangle hold, ready to snap his shoulder bone if necessary. Puck began to say something about Misery only to stop mid-sentence by the cracking noise coming from his shoulder, a loud scream was heard and Misery quickly jumped out of bed.
Quickly pulling Kain off from the crying male under him, he rushed out of the hotel before anyone could get up and catch them in time. They ran as far as they could from the town before stopping to catch their breathe. Misery wiped the sweat off his face and as he looked at his hand, there was blood on it as well. Kain just rested against a tree and gave a weak smile to Misery before he realized that Kain’s arm was hurt.

Chapter five: Misery’s past
As Misery is bandaging Kain’s arm he starts to get flashbacks of his past from when he use to get beaten up and Solace bandaging him. Kain will learn a little more about Misery’s past in this chapter, why he’s the way he is and why he’s seeking Solace. This is where the flashback of Misery and Solace’s childhood will come in.

Chapter six: Meeting Forlorn
Upon coming to this town, Misery rents a hotel for about two or three weeks, because that’s how long they will be staying and tells Kain to be a good boy because he has to go to work a lot because he was slacking off too much before. When he leaves, Kain hangs out in the park only to find this little girl that no one wants to hang out with. He starts to hang out with her and she tells him that people say that her father was a murder and that when she grows up, she’s going to be a murder just like her father. Kain just pats her on the head and tells her that everything is going to be okay because one day, she’s going to be able to prove all of them wrong.
Forlorn would stay with Kain at the park until sunset and then go home to her mother while Kain stayed there waiting for Misery. Every day this would happen, Kain would walk out to the park with Misery as he heads for work and waits for Forlorn to come and just plays the whole day because the best part of being a child is the carefreeness. No child should ever have to go through something like that, every child deserves to just have fun and live life free.
About the last week or so of their stay in that town, Kain is waiting for Misery at night after Forlorn had just left when a bunch late teens to early twenties jump him and beat him up. I’m just saying but, when one of them is choking him and he’s trying to pull away his arm or something like that and can’t, he runs out of air and faints. They throw him across the lawn and is about to leave when his demon side comes out, they all get scared and tries to run away but can’t because the demon side of Kain is just that good. Let’s say there were about four or five people there that jumped him. Whenever Kain’s demon side comes out though, he does get injured as well, his body starts to get cuts and all that other stuff. I’m not sure if the demon will kill them or just beat them up very badly.
When Misery walks home and sees that big mess, along with some areas that are burnt from the flame that came from the demon, as he was transforming or something. He rushes over to Kain, making sure that Kain is all right and still alive and breathing, he calls the ambulance and they quickly reach the area along with the police and fire fighters. All the injured people are taken to the hospital and no one was able to find the person that did this. Misery has a slight feeling that it was Kain but never confronts him with it.
Misery spends that week in the hospital with Kain instead of going to work, although he should be going to work because he was slacking off but then again he was working over time the whole time he was in this town. Anyway, Forlorn would come and visit him in the hospital as well, she had a feeling that it was because Kain had hung out with her that now he was beaten up. She also tells Misery that it was her fault that Kain is like this, Misery doesn’t hold it against her since he knows how she kind of feels, being left alone and hated by everyone you’re around.
Kain is in a coma for the week and when he does wake up, he’s glad to see Misery and Forlorn there by his side, although Misery is sleeping and Forlorn is fixing some flowers for him in a vase by the window. He still can’t really move much but since he has a demon inside of him, he can heal a lot faster than normal people.
Knowing that if Misery stays with Kain in the hospital for a couple of weeks until he heals enough to continue on, he delays his journey for Solace and the job that is waiting for him in the next town. He calls his cousin and tells her that he’ll be late to the next town because he has to stay a few extra weeks and she just tells the people in the next town because she’s the big owner of the company. In this scene though, there is a slight feeling that Misery likes Kain a lot since he’s willing to delay everything, even Solace, to stay with Kain and continue his mission with Kain by his side. They leave once Kain is better and can start to walk on his own, although Misery does carry him sometimes and makes sure that he doesn’t over-stress himself...although I think that Misery is over-stressing himself...

Chapter seven: Kain’s past
In this chapter, Kain will fully heal up and Misery will be working, like usual. In this chapter though, I think you’ll learn more about Kain’s past and everything like that, although Blank had already explained it in chapter two, try to go a little more in depth. Maybe talking a little about Lucifer or have Lucifer come and talk to him whenever Misery is gone. Somehow Kain knows who the man is, but hasn’t ever seen his face, then Lucifer will say something about one day, he’ll come and take back what belongs to him.

Chapter eight: Final
Misery will encounter Solace for the first time in eight years, Solace will call Misery by his real name, Seraph, and Kain will get a little confused, although he doesn’t really let it get to him. Solace is, at first, a little confused that he knows Misery and even his real name, Misery gets overjoyed and hugs him tightly. They just hang out wherever they met Solace and just talk, Misery telling Solace about their journey to find him and Solace telling him about his journey to find himself, although I guess that Solace would ask some questions as well just to clarify things for himself.
Misery hands Solace a picture of his family, the one that was at the hospital, and Kain takes a quick glance at it, realizing that the two elders in there were the ones that he killed. Kain distances himself from the other two after seeing the picture, he’s in his own little world and maybe there could be flashbacks to what happened all the way in the beginning before he met Misery. He plans out that he will leave then later that night, and maybe see Lucifer because in the chapter before, Lucifer does ask him to come but then he said that he wanted to help Misery find Solace.
Kain leaves at night when Misery is sleeping, Solace sees him, and questions him where he’s going since he came all this way with Misery and from Misery’s little story that he was telling him, the seemed to be rather close friends. Kain doesn’t really answer and just leaves because he knows that he’s done something wrong that could never be forgiven.
When Misery wakes up the next morning, Solaces tells him that Kain left but also that maybe Misery shouldn’t go after him because he seems like he needs his space. Although Misery is a bit hesitant, he listens to Solace and asks him how he’s so sure. Solace answers with something about the sadness in Kain’s eyes when he questioned him about leaving.
It changes scene to Kain where he’s at a deserted place with three gravestones, there’s a picture of all three and you’ll realize that both of Misery’s parents picture are on two of the graves, the third one seems to be a little mysterious, but then Kain will mumble something about his mother and you’ll see another shadow, although you won’t know who it is, it’s Lucifer, his father. Kain takes off his eye patch and places it in front of his mother’s grave and leaves with his father.

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